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I really like your style of writing. This left a bitter taste at the end. I really enjoyed how this poem flowed. Great job!

I really loved your poem I was interested the whole time especially when he started to thank her for breaking up with them. At first I felt really bad for ...

I really like this. I like that there is more of a focus on the words then who the character is. This is great I also really liked the flow ...

I love this story and how at the end of your entry you leave us hanging thinking about if she really will get rid of the baby. I loved your ...

I liked it interesting and i really could relate to this story with me being in high school myself. I thought the pace was good and your flow was a ...

Oh come on clifhanger! I loved it the suppence the sandness. You need to post more like now i'm beggin you. On the review side of things. I loved the ...

I'm really liking this add on. It's very well thought out. The only thing is i felt like you rushed through Bella and Edward's panic. You could have spent a ...

it was so quick. I know this is just a start to your story and i think you flow is nice but i would like so more detail. Keep up ...

April 8th He stayed there a long time, but he got tired and left. He locked the door and left me without water and food. He knew I had water, ...

i really could relate to this storty and that's what i enjoyed that the most. Your flow was good and i liked your word choices. Keep up the writing and ...

This was great. Can't wait till his new book comes out this month. Keep up the writing and the good work

i can relate to this poem and those are the best. I thought you really reached out to your aduience well. I thought your flow was good. I also really ...

I loved the depth and meaning you used in this story. I thought the flow was nice and that you were telling a great story. Over all i thought you ...

I really liked it. It had depth and meaning and i think you did a really great job. At first at though that this poem would have a rythm sceame ...

Is this meant to focus on the story so we nothing about these characters? Other than that i thought you story was good. Keep working at it