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Very..erm..interesting...I think that it is well written and I dont have any real critiscim (sorry but it was good!). Oh...one more thing...even though it was good, I wont be bathing ...

She went to her kitchen, Then opened her cabinet, Grabbed her bottle of pills, She opened her mouth, And took her life anyway. I don't really get how the beginning ...

Even though you can't really understand what they went through without going through it yourself, you really captured the sadness. I agree with someone (dont remember who...srry) that the last ...

Very, very good...You created a great atmosphere and appealed to your reader:) Nikki

Ack...Was gonna say english but then tried to ostand up...lol...I rode yesterday, the day before and the day before for like five hours a day and I hadnt ridden in ...

I am yet another newbie and have already put up quite a few poems and one action story. I love to write and really want to improve it and get ...

Thanks! Please read my other poems too! Nikki

Wow...Thats what came to my mind...I def. have a strong dislike for both Paris Hilton and her sister, Nikki (a disgrace to Nikkis everywhere) but I don't think that anyone ...

I usually don't go for Vampire Stories and the like, but I really liked this one. Your story was written exceptionally well and your sentence variation and action was good. ...

I really am not willing to get into the whole argument about religion, but I am a Christian, a Protestant to be exact. I believe in God, but I am ...

I feel so privleged! I wanna join and be the fourth! Nikki

The story, in my opinion has some real potential. It needs a little bit more detail and could possibly be longer. I have one real tip for him, Show, don't ...

I woke up with a start and looked around. Shaking my head, I laughed at how paranoid I was getting. I rolled back over and closed my eyes. As I ...

Greed is a goblin, That washes over us, Leading us away from honesty And hard work And into cheating and caring Only for ourselves. Greed's clutches snatch At even the ...

A storm is a powerful beast, Creating havoc and destroying All that lies in its path. But it creates a sense of wonder. Lightening touching down before your eyes, Just ...