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Re: Story w/o a name! Very short...
many thx for the comments...the only problem is...i havent decided what happens, so i cant write more... nikki
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Re: In the Castle
I really, really liked this... It did look like medevial times...I'm not much of an expert on art, (I really stink at it) but it looked great:)
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Re: Storms
Brian, I don't really see quite what you are asking me or telling me. Nicole
Jan 3, 2005 -
Re: Death- First Poem
Once again, thx for the comments! I really thought that even though the topic has been used, I wrote a different type of poem on it.
Jan 3, 2005 -
Re: Greed
Many thx for the comments...I tried to rewrite, lmk what you think... Greed is a goblin That takes over us, Leading us away from honesty And hard work And into ...
Jan 3, 2005 -
Re: Regrets *1st post on here* lol that isnt the regret!
good topic in my opinion, but try not to take on such a "preaching" tone (someone else said that too) and maybe make it a little bit shorter. It was ...
Jan 3, 2005 -
Re: School fights
Okay...Recently in my school, there was a fight (as usual) and no adults were around (also as usual) It was basicaly just an older and stronger kid picking on the ...
Jan 3, 2005 -
Re: How DO you write?
I really just get an idea and start writing...Afterwartds, I reread and usually find mistakes, things that could be more descriptive, etc...
Jan 3, 2005 -
Re: What are you listening to?
Usher- Yeah!
Jan 3, 2005 -
Re: All American Girl by Meg Cabot
I also read this book and I really, really liked it. As a word of advice, her other books were also really good, so do read them:) It was a ...
Jan 3, 2005 -
Re: Make Up The Worst Possible Opening Line Ever
Heres my try "This is going to be a long tiring story of the lives of some very boring and tiring people, so you might as well stop reading it ...
Jan 3, 2005 -
Re: Giving In
I think that you captured the pressure of the moment very well, but like Brian I sort of lost you at some points....I think that the italics were speech for ...
Jan 3, 2005 -
Re: HOPE
Very good! I didn't think that I was going to like it because I usually don't like Sci-Fi stories, but it was really good. I really like the first chapter. ...
Jan 3, 2005 -
Re: Over 13: The AIM Tango
You really did a good job on this... I liked it because it was so realistic... Also...I know from experience how on AIM things like this happen. In my experience, ...
Jan 3, 2005 -
Re: The America Project
Loved the twist ending and the story in general...Just one thing besides spelling mistakes already pointed out... [quote="A.O. Avalon"]I nod, just as I did then. His next comment rings chillingly ...
Jan 3, 2005