nickelpickle

Veru powerful poem..Besidese changing it to black I can't really think of anything. Great Job!

here comes the optomist! 250!

you said I smelled like silk does silk smell? Kind of funny...Good beginning... Like others sniff coffee or baking, You don't smell baking, maybe baking cookies though. the way her ...

Do you remember when we used to play limbs intertwined one person two heads? This is more like one thing than five. It doesn't really flow and you need commas! ...

Well, I am very squeamish around the very mention of blood. This didn't freak me out, so right away, well done. The jab cross to your nose makes something give ...

i still love the welcomes though!

I personally think that roasting a cat is horrible. I do not, though, think that it is anywhere near as bad as roasting (killing) a human. Yes, he should get ...

I am embaressed about my weight. I am really tiny and I wear a size 0 (gasp) and am 5'9'' 1/2 and am only 105 pounds...

didnt like it...too many other poems on it, try song writing (you are really good at it!)

actualy it had more but my teacher made me take it out to meet the word limit

Random name... I had to do this for school, really is not my best, just okay. I thought it lacked depth and all that great stuff..lol.. THis was my first ...

All I can say is wow! I loved this. Short amd to the point, lots of meaning. Perfection:)

slurring obsceneties and bragging about fictional escapades. change it to bragging of fictional escapades. She strode past dark strangers, whose grave voices whispered to her, disgusting things that m

Great job! I really liked this except it got me tongue tied. The rhyming was to forced. Manay good poems do not rhyme! Anyway, great job....

niteowl finally got tara to give me a nickname!