nickelpickle

awesome..absolutely amazing.. i loved the flow and imagry of the poem....Nothing to critique, good job!

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hmm...i liked it...i think...no.. I did, really.. I would like it even more if you seperated it into interest began to waver... Anyway, good job, keep writing!

*runs and hides...* I am a Nicole too, just in case you were wondering and I sometimes feel the SAME EXACT way!!! Personally...lets think...i hate my hair...i hate most of ...

this flowed very nicely... I liked it, but you def. need punctuation.. you lose your reader without it... I did like it a lot though:) -Nicole BTW. Your poetry is ...

Ok here goes The Real World okay...i am assuming that this is not part of your poem...i thought that it was, so pleasedo something about it... Welcome to the real ...

okay... a madding pain like no other That was a good start... a madding pain in my head With a poem this short, you shouldn't be repeating... i think that ...

first of all...this flowed like a really, really long run on sentence. I don't know why, but it did. Is it that hard to write the word "and" instead of ...

Really, I believe everyone Can have an opinion on the matter. I myself used to be idealistic, And what is called a romantic, But that was before. Amazing beginning! I ...

Return to a magnificence treasured by time To a majesty revived A beauty rebuilt Joy restored A cold and desolate bell tower Rusted bells clanging together in bitter defeat The ...

talk talk talking on the phone, sometimes I liked the repetition there, but didn't like "sometimes" I kept telling myself don’t fall don’t fall don’t fall again, your repetition ony ...

omg...this was amazing...make a few correctoins and it will be great,...i pray that this didn't actually happen to you...if it did, i am so teribbly sorry..

personaly not one of my favorite types of was good for what it was though...

One word...Wow... This just left me...speechless...i loved it! You are an awesome writer and use a ton of emotion...awesome job

mmhmm... I presonally am Protestant pretty much.... My mom is Catholic, but she hated it and didn't continue with it, so she never really gave me a religion. Last summer ...