nickelpickle

Blah.... I really hate horses sometimes..... Sorry but it can get annoying... I like petting them though, and I've always wanted to ride them... and give them carrots... Do horses ...

Everyone thanks for your responses. Bobo, Tess, Dusk I really don't know what you guyz need to do the banners. I want horse banners, but I am pretty open. I ...

Did anyone see it? What did everyone think compared to the first?

On his knees on the cold, aching earth His hands pressed against each other The eyes, moist with tears, squinted together The raggy head descending This is good, but I ...

Nikki, not nickelpickle. Please. I simply criticize as much as I would want to hear. I would be happy to look at your other poem

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Okay.. My first concern is the beginning: i wrote this poem ages ago, about 2 years for english i believe. we than had to attach an explanation. What is your ...

Wow. Niteowl, I thought that this was one of your best. An excellent message, perfect flow and great description. Keep writing!