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According to the media, women must be THIN, pretty facially, "good" hair, perfect boobs, shorter thasn their boyfriend (????) and in some cases younger than him. Let me see..I dont ...

wow..thirty five pages.... anyway, back to the originial question... First of all, he has to have a good personality. He has to be sweet, concerned, fun to be around, and ...

Okay, I think Griffinkeeper got all the grammar. You wrote this very, very well but it felt like a piece of flash fiction to me. Write a prologue to it ...

heh...I used to take scissors and take off the barbies heads, fill them with some type of food and paste them back together to make em "eat" heh.... i must ...

Iam going to put in corrections below each stanza... End of all Hope, Beginning of Eternal Sadness He tries to speak out, but go ahead don’t listen to him, nobody ...

emma- is hard on herself, yet pulls up everyone elses spirits. niteowl- is named Nicole as well, group leader of YWS Book Club, is really nice and is official gift ...

*cough cough* "Bullies ur either one our get bullied by one" puh-lease....we are on a writing website...come on, please use correct grammar when you know how to...when you don't, it's ...

^^^ is getting better at writing

^^^^ will always talk to me and help//

My parents never got married. They didn't even marry when they found out my mom was pregnant. My mom and my dad lived together until I was about three and ...

hmm...I wont say what I would do, cause that would be bad advice....heres my suggestion: try to sit down and talk to your mom...a lot of time, mothers understand things ...

srry,

never have, never will.. my skin is naturally as dark as most peoples is after about 24 hours of tanning cause i have native american, greek and italian blood...combined, they ...

no worries...just didnt want to take the credit for niteowls excellent poem :)

nope, I cant take credit for "Not Another Nicole" poem...niteowl wrote that one ;)