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oh my god areida....that was amazing....you are amazing at emotions.... i felt the emotion and love the point of view you wrote it on...i think you could easily get it ...

Show dont tell...put us in the mind of the person being portrayed....capture more emotion... you started well, you just need to expand on it. It def. shows the injustice and ...

I liked it a was ammusing, especially the thing about her gouging her eyes out...quite amusing, very well written..just one little nitpick.. My wisdom teeth had been taken out. I ...

heh...i agree...unpacking stinks.... even if i am just going for three days or w.e, i put out my huge suitcase and take big armfuls of stuff and put it in ...

1. Teaching- I love kids and want to make a difference in their lives 2. Psychology- it would be child pychology again because i love kids and because i have ...

^^ is awesome at giving advice

five for me are....teaching elementary school children, psychology, law, writing and law enforcement.

you may not have him...never....he is ALL MINE!!!

llikes bananas

is home schooled but goes to community college

^is hyperactive and just got a gf

me??? picky?? I think not...heh.. ^ makes up corny songs and is named greg

heh.. ^Is thanking also an awesome writer

omg... every one is soo pretty... and the guys....*blushes* I'll shut up now...I promised myself, no more falling for older guys online.. *slaps self of head* Congrats on the engagement ...

nope, no offense taken...i just thought cause i was the only one who said anything about being skinny and you said it...ya...nm