nickelpickle

I'm seven through and I'm still interestd. I agree with most of the others, it was a bit confusing, but at least its beginning to come together. As usual, your ...

Hey guys!! So yeah, I'm Nikki. It's been a year since I was on the site, but after a long year, I am officially back! Anyone remember me? Missed you ...

Hello, welcome, all that. All comments and corrections are in bold. Chapter 1 “What if I told you that I didn’t love you anymore?” asked the girl questioningly, while a ...

*blinks* Bambi--- right... Anyway, welcome! We all aspire to become writers here, and we have some very talented ones among us. We have a spell check, which always helps. I ...

nickelpickle

I couldn't figure out how to fix the first stanza. Tell me what you think of the other changes. A mother is someone to lean on. A mother is someone ...

Thank you! Updated version on the way.

Thank you. It took me about thirty pieces of paper before I was happy with it. And I know it's cliche... :) Couldn't help it.. I read it out loud ...

Hello, fellow horse rider!

Thanks. What do you think of the message, the grammar, the structure?

I wrote this as a Christmjas present for my mother. It iis printed on clear glass with a picture of me. A mother is someone to lean on. A mother ...

I am Happy Scared Loved up Surprised Not really here Wishing I was somewhere else or wishing someone else was here I agree with Snoink.. It sounds like a broken ...

First off, Happy Birthday...I know that I always say this, but you are an excellent writer. This is nitpick, but I would say "a strong and fearless person." It just ...

I like you repeat Here I am for emphasis and the metaphor as if its a cloud in the sky. I agree that we do need to know the tune ...

I'd love to help; contrary to some, I enjoy not only prose, but poetry as well.