nickelodeon

Wow. This was really good. I loved it because it was easy to understand, but it wasn't obvious to me how it would end. Very nicely done. (Personally, i hate ...

Short, sweet, and to the point. =) I'm not totally sure what's going on the whole time. Who does he shout that she has a crush on, the passerby? If ...

I thought it was extremely well written. I loved your choice of words for most of the story. I could easily picture the room, the soldiers, the people, etc. (obviously, ...

Nice take on the war. I love the perspective from the crutch. Very unique. I did think it was interesting, and I did WANT to keep reading, which is good ...

It had a very promising beginning. beautifully worded, easy to picture, nice flow. The first paragraphs were really good. In my opinion, it started to lose its flow somewhere around ...

This was a very sweet story. It is wonderfully imaginative considering that you know nothing about the real old woman. I'm not sure if i'm crazy about how she suddenly ...

I love the name. Now i'm curious as to how she got a name like that. I'd consider either adding a second part to the story, or even stick it ...

This is mostly a good story. It kept my interest, which is impressive, because i ususally dislike reading long pieces. If you are looking to improve it, then here are ...

Okay, it's well written. Most of the type-o's have already been pointed out, so there's no need to repeat. My only question is if it is a realistic story. Meaning, ...

“Americano,” they muttered with an air of superiority. Lynnie forced an expression of indifference, and squeezed through the jostling bodies towards a lonely bench on the side of Spanish Market ...

Okay, everytime i turned the radio on this summer (in light of the anniversary to-do) there was the same commercial about a Diana exhibit in a local museum. So apparently ...

This definitely has possibilities. I love the ending, where Jason feels worse for his grandmother than for the deceased. I think this is a very relatable situation, adn you described ...

Hatchet Road The garage shielded us from the cruel July sun. Boredom had left me lacking energy and interest, flopped in a lawn chair and totally ignorant of the life-changing ...

Wow. That's really good. I can totally relate to Amanda, in how she wants to be better, thinks she should be better, that whole mind state. You did a great ...

Well, i'm really interested now. The ending sounds like something exciting is about to happen, which I honestly hadn't expected when i went into the non-fiction forum. I was a ...