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Aw Ash.. it's were , with us being all writers and such... Aw thanks! This ^ is all brilliant! When I do more crtis I'll donate more... I'm falling behind ...

I do not usually do poetry, I think this is my second ever :shock: so if none of this helps, I apologise in advance! Little girl so lost, Sunken so ...

Try posting chapters one by one? I don't know if you realise but this is 14 pages long :shock: and nobody is actually going to read it in these forums. ...

Er, I suggest you refresh, then try again. Check you do not have the doc open as you upload. Sorry I'm not a computer whizz. I look forward to this

I know this is going slow... it is only the first week still and it's chapter 3! But I have such lengthy previous chapters... well, I think so. - He's ...

Oh Ash, this is a wonderful story but the tense is just killing me! It is the thorn in your poisoned roses... no pun intended. It's just wrecking such a ...

Hope this helps - this is totally wonderful You have amazing description! But maybe too much on the house right at the beginning? And what's with all the 'that' words? ...

Sorry this took me so long. I thought you'd wake up tomorrow morning (or at least pop back on here whenever you americans do... whatever the time is over there) ...

HERE YOU GO I could not possibly leave you another night. This isn't much, but hey, you ask and I give! Honestly, I love the rewrite but It's a little ...

Vampires? When are there vampires? Oh yeah, my bad, I haven't done your chapter 3 yet. Wooops. Why don't you, in the future, just add chapter 1 1.2 in another ...

All completed :) Hope you found them good

Wait up no. Once A Dream, Always A Nightmare Flashbacks to past... shouldn't be romance... ha... if there is skip it! That would be sooo cool

Okay I'm going to go with the email... things on here aren't your taste lol. I have heaps of non-romance but none on here yet. :)

You bring up good points, ChernobyllyInclined, but this is under constant work on about 3 different forums I'm on... So the end result is going to be major different. This ...

Firebird: Just anything. I know it's Advanced *I pay you in lots of points if I like what you say/think you deserve them* and if you have a problem I'll ...