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second chapter, much better it's really forming into a story now! Issac needs more descrition. I need to imagine him. Know him. In order to connect with him i need ...

First of all : great! Oh heavens this was a brilliant story. Didn't flow as well as i liked and *curse* you say said so many times. i said this, ...

wow i'm in 11 grade and i've never done that. i use a calculator, it's my brain.

wow, these are so riveting! Amazing photography, you should really sell a few of these if you wanted, i'd buy them! Where where they taken? You have talent, that's for ...

Over all i love ti! But seriously, ha ha, begin it in word. You've made so many mistakes which could have been picked up through even spell check. Unless you ...

No idea who this is, but wow! *breathless* The detail... amazing. hair... so perfect. face... exquisite! I wish i could draw like this. His hair is very nifty. Looks quite ...

Sorry but Ultra looks like he (he?) has breasts, and long eyelashes. Other than that small bit i am loving Rocky. Looks pretty snazzy there Matt. Matt? Mattster? You should ...

More of a dingo but hey you're not Australian! Inverse the colours. If it's night you should do black paper white pen. Always a good thought. I do like that ...

That... is amazing! Pretty original thinking my friend. So cute. Now it just needs a better background. Come on, you can do better than white! I might make one of ...

i am guessing sort of kind of. Err. What can i say? you look smashing. Why waste an energy drink though! THINK OF THE STARVING AFRICANS! Not to preach or ...

er my name is Nichola. aka Niccy! Don't mind either. I'm sure everybody already hate me because of my reviews... its unintentional but not a great way to begin on ...

Okay first of all, you, like said above, need to include "quotation marks" for speech! I like this story! It's... sweet... predictable but sweet! Now at the moment it feels ...

I am reading it now, but i wish people didn't post the story back it kills my computer ahh! But i am reviewing it. Give me 4 or 5 days ...

I put R because i was unsure if this could be classified as adult themes... but i suppose it is. Playing it safe. Rainbow Boys, Rainbow High, Rainbow Road. Alex ...

A very good story! I am liking it, but you need to double check spelling and punctuation. It's a good start but needs more depth, descriptions, and definitely more checking ...