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meep. that wasn't supposed to happen... I'll try to reformat it... so sorry! Oh thankyou. Took me so long to write, pleased you liked it. Middle of editing the second ...

Impressive. So believable and yet so distantly unbelievable. You went into character so well, i really think this should be extended to a longer story. The ending took my breath ...

That's an impressive poem. Deep thought and emotions really came up. You chose such impressive wors, they fit so well you're a great writer/poet. The repetition fits perfectly, and its ...

The beginning is great. It flows quite easily, a few spelling and grammar errors but nothing spell check can't fix. The whole ending ruins it a bit. Sorry to sound ...

that's so cute and sweet. mega awwww Faces look a bit flat i must say especially his but hey, the pic is still great! I'd love that if it was ...

Thats trippy stuff. I wish i could draw that way! Colour would add so much to it. But b/w is super cute too. The detail is amazing too, and their ...

They're all pretty sweet. The last picture looks too much like a happy snap, and the flash just brings out too much light. The one of his girlfriend is sweet, ...

Updated 25 November Now all edits below been incorporated into it to my liking. This is only Chapter One. It is slightly different, and this is merely an opening of ...

Omg i love you! This is super awsome! Love it so much. *blush* i remember thinking monsters were under my bed when i was little and got to sleep in ...

Great story, it's really interesting and a good read. A few things: -you should add some more attention to Kate and his relationship, make them more acquainted, because you feel ...

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First of all, i agree from above, if this was a book, i'd have put it down long ago. It drags on far too long and could easily be chopped ...

Fourth: Please do keep going, it is going to kill me too (^^) and it's developed so well. I commend you highly on your descriptions, and you have imagery within ...

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