niccinic15

Yeah, I know it's kinda short... I wrote it in detention :P Lol. But thanks for the comments, guys, I'm glad you like it :)

I know this love is very real. It's something I can hear and feel. It didn't take you long to heal This broken heart of mine. Every night, I quickly ...

Thanks guys, I appreciate it so much =]

Thanks, guys (: I appreciate it so much. That poem was also written out of my raw emotions, over my ex who passed away in June. Also, my piece "Silence" ...

Yeah I kind of figured that I'd be the only one to really get this poem. Basically it was supposed to be about a love that was dangerous for the ...

Review my poem? (:

Reading this in school was not a good idea... I was laughing out loud so uncontrollably, I actually got sent out. Good job, I love it. No suggestions whatsoever. ♥

I don't really understand this? I mean, the flow and everything goes together pretty well, I just don't pick up on the deeper meaning... For every person, There's a count ...

Burn me with your sea green eyes, Entice me with your sinful lies. I'll beg you 'till I realize The shit you've done to me. Come with me now, take ...

Echoes of a broken heart, And memories of a friend. Hot sparks of a young romance Bore flame upon the end. Kisses so tender and sweet, Embraces, oh, so warm. ...

Haha, yeah I know that the last stanza has a different rhythm... It wasn't really intentional at the beginning of the piece, but when I read over it, I liked ...

I love this (: It's a very weird idea, but I can kind of see a story coming out of it. Nice!

I like it. A lot. I feel a personal connection with it, as my significant other just moved to Florida, and I'm still in Kentucky :/ But anyways... Holding to ...

This frustrated me... Quite badly, actually. To start with, I don't understand the very first line: The lost night, in the moment, the warm sunny day, twists away Is it ...

Your idea here was good, but I'm not really sure if I'm liking this too much... I like the repetition of how it seemed like just yesterday, and I like ...