neversaynikki

We hung our legs over the edge of a springtime of wisteria, calling back to the birds that made their homecoming heard. We told you, try listening with your ears ...

I know that a lot of people aren't fans of the stream-of-consciousness, free verse style, but I really like it, and this was very well done. I can always appreciate ...

The imagery and tone of this piece are both so strong -- I usually tire of verse that's as long as this, but it was gorgeous. There's something so aloof ...

There is something mechanical about it – not at all like clockwork, but more like flashing red lights and spiked metal gears, the sound of heavy boots on the pavement ...

Cacophony. I adore that word like no other. In general, the vocabulary in this is just lovely. This was charming :] The third stanza especially. You are brilliant and this ...