neonwriter

I shiver as I walk across the cold, desolate dream land The trees are bare and snow piles on, as if it were a topping to a meal Winds whip ...

I shiver violently as I sit in the dark street Cars rattle my little cardboard hut as they race by My old tattered, green overcoat shield my faded smiley t-shirt ...

What is this song singling in on? I mean is it about love or like a guy just wants a girl? But anyway I definitely would show this to your ...

This is a very fitting poem for the season and I could just see a cold, crisp park in the late afternoon sun :) I really want to see you ...

Oh my god! This was phenomenal and written so vibrantly written I thought she was telling it to me.I'm assuming that he cheated and or left her and so these ...

Authors note Hi guys! You really ate up my last two poems and so, I'm introducing my newest one! *Clap clap!* Since the holidays were rapidly approaching I decided to ...

This was a good story just, no paragraphs after a character spoke. It drove my eyes crazy to see that much writing crammed into one paragraph. Now I don't know ...

GRAMMAR NAZI ALERT! this poem drove me crazy with just 1 simple mistake "When they didn't DONUT quick enough" WOAHH! PROOF READ THE WORK! Also "faster! Faster!" Why isn't the ...

I loved this poem! But you could've made it longer and more in depth. What did he do to hurt you? And dont do the parenthesis around like (truth) put ...

Darkness creeps up my wall as my Father shuts the door The night light does nothing but light the little corner is occupies I snuggle deeper into my blankets, trying ...

Hi there! We share alot in common and if you ever need help with anything just inbox me! I'll always give you tips if you need them! Have a fun ...

An old yellow car hangs onto the ferris wheel by one wire, rust engulfing it The weeds have overtaken the old, peeled roller coasters The clouds gather up above it, ...

I'm really enjoying your work! Also I'm glad your enjoying mine ;) I've been reading this saga for awhile now and I'm really wrapped up in it. My favorite character ...

I enjoyed this but I'm gonna let another user go over spelling mistakes cause' I don't like doing it (lol not lazy just dont wanna be mean) Also some parts ...

awww! you should submit this into someone or like a magazine! I love this and it's so heart touching. Man this is a tear jerker also is this about child ...