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Thanks, no it's not Uzbek; it is a conlang. Anyway the predicament is not being able to get close to the tree, as hard as you might try, and waiting ...

Thanks man, that means alot.

I took that step among the sparkling blades. They pointed the way, to what is yet unseen. A serpent shall not take, Take this away. There is a secret here ...

Dark Flame makes me think of Dark Knight. In more serious tone though, I liked how you used flame to mean something else. It's not hard to figure out what ...

That was awesome! Seriously though, I definitely like the plot and the flow of the poem just mad it even better. It is definitely something that I can relate to. ...

I liked it better when I didn't know the specifics of what it was about. The piece definitely had some emotion to it, and not just blatant expression. That is ...

First off, I liked the concept, but take it from me that you need to add some punctuation in there. The scattered commas and nothing else make it look slightly ...

The first two stanzas make me think of a crush, and the second two make me think someone just got crushed on a one night stand. I don't know if ...

Do you mean this would probably fit an older audience? Maybe part of the confusion was that this was written for a Christian audience.

This was written somewhat as a challenge and response between God and Satan. I think it's pretty descriptive, and shows their personalities pretty well. I am The Bird of Prey,The ...

The cool thing about this poem is that you made the "child" sound both bad and good. You have it sounding like a mourning mother thinking of better days with ...

Personally, I don't really think the idea of punishment for suicide is about hate. It's about a complete lack of faith. That's just my two cents. The poem itself is ...

The cold dark water So deep and quiet Washing along the shore Moving but not changing I couldn't help but think when reading this that this gave no meaning or ...

I don't really know much about photography, but I didn't really like the fact that there were two random people in the background. At least that's what it seemed like. ...

even if you do it's doesn’t change the minds of others it doesn’t change my mind either because you This part got me a little confused. I've no idea what ...