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The memory of a pearl hovering over green fields with a glow like a flame. I chased it as if death were behind me. And then the chest closed over ...

This was awesome. It started so simply that I thought I would be interested, but you lead my interest in a rising climax all the way to the end. Creeped ...

A thimble, a rose, and a ring, It seems I got caught on a tire swing. And the sky above was as sweet as cherry mixed with honeycomb. Clouds like ...

I can't help but think that there really isn't much to this poem. A simple statement of thoughts without much else. Sing. Sing in praises of our wonderful Lord. One ...

The best way to understand this is that it was written as if from the view of Jesus. It wasn't meant to be angry or dark, but you are right ...

This was a really cool poem. The main thing that I would have to say is that you should add punctuation; you seemed to have completely ignored it in this ...

Thanks for being detailed, but all I really got from it is that you want me to pretty much scratch the poem. You did tell me what was good or ...

All things were quiet, living in such a swirling whisper. I was carried by the wind. Not a single tear could fall among such rose petals. When it began to ...

Right on man! I enjoyed this, and that's all I have to say.

I don't know why you say you suck at poetry, this is actually really good. I tend to like very image heavy poems, but you have made an exception. I ...

FINALLY! Somebody does something rather enjoyable! That's all I have to say.

You might think me daft, but I poured my blood out like a breaking glass. And so you scream and laugh at the same time as they prepare to call ...

There comes a sadness deep within, That sings a solemn tune, Tiptoes oh-so-sneakily, Like silky sudden poison. Using this kind of description messes with my head in a good way, ...

Ready like this is like listening to meshuggah. =)

No matter how much you want to expound upon the emotion within you. You must realize that, no matter how much you describe, you're heart is not likely to run ...