nekros

No you didn't offend me ;-) I tend to ignore rhyming strict rhyming patterns as I think they make the poem sound silly. There wasn't supposed to be a pattern, ...

Hey man, I'm glad someone read it with the right mindset. Thank you!

It's like a wind passing me by, a cool cyclone swirling to the sky. And in the stillness I thought I might die. Let the storm rage like the twinkle ...

The bird in my chest Is thrusting Against the ivory Of my rib cage The noise Of its fear Unables my thoughts I think you mean "disables" And I Sounds ...

I thought this poem was going to be rather cliché, but you blew my mind. Very awesome! I didn't really understand the poem until I started to get towards the ...

There's nothing quite like the fear before a storm. Looking up to a dripping sky that makes your blood slow but your heart beat faster. Will you fall on me? ...

I love the way you talk to anyone, Do you have to talk to her I love the way you love animals, you know I'm allergic to fur I love ...

She strolls around On little paws Not seeing us eye to eye, But feeling us heart to heart. This is my favorite line. She may have a tail, She may ...

Every color is part of another. And so I thought I was a rainbow rock on a mountain full of gray, only to scratch the surface of a boulder and ...

I’m like a hurricane. Raging through the valleys, Wreaking havoc and destruction On anything that crosses my path. I’m like a bolt of lightning. Anger flashes without warning. I fry ...

I’ve spent the last four years with sand under my tongue and waves breaking in my ears. Lovely imagery! I’d say it was worth it if I could look you ...

Thanks!

I know the prettiest girl in the world! Every upward glance, Is a look into a shining lense. And all of the sudden, I find myself falling into the canyon ...

Ok, I really don't see how this is about tolerance/intolerance, but other than that it's pretty good. You follow her, Even though you see the things she does when her ...

I had an eerie sensation reading this poem. Your thought process seems to be very similar to mine it seems. It was an awesome feeling, and I like the poem. ...