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This is a poem based on Walt Witman's style of writing. Enjoy! I celebrate the nature roads tinged with Humans. The way the trees seem to sway to the same ...

In those days, or nights –it all depended—Kate was always alone and in her room. It was the only time, she figured, that she could do it. Her window would ...

So... she's going back? to the place she was in before she was in the forest all of a sudden? and was it the gods who fastforwarded time? or did ...

Your style of writing reminds me of poetry in the way you do it. I was sort of confused when it was a new scene or a new pov or ...

I love the ending. But I think you need to put more inner thoughts so they can transition form thought to thought smoothly insted of just talking inside his head, ...

It was a pretty short chapter and we still don't know why she's in the forest or how she got there, I imagin there is an explanation comming hopefully. I ...

Okay, I hope I fixed that whole going to fast thing, at least a little bit, the one with the grandmother and then the growing up thing. the one where ...

Okay people, go easy on me, it's my first time posting anything. This is a prolong to a story, I just want to see if you like it.

Never in my short life had I fully comprehended the true meaning of death. I didn’t have to; I was an innocent four year old girl. I had no reason ...

I think that you shouldn't have skipped to the wedding, I think that writing about how he no longer visited her, or how there were rumors of a betrothal, and ...

I agree with the fist comment. It is refreshing to see a Cinderella story that is not overdone. However, I have read all 14chs. and I think something is missing. ...

I think the second is more interesting, you could play with the plot and all. I think the were-bear stuff is a twist. I say go for the second one. ...