nativecatcher

I liked your story I thought it was pretty good. You included a lot of details so it made it easy to.....imagine what the scenes would be.I liked your characters, ...

Prologue: On a pleasant spring Thursday everything began to change. Ms.Carson’ third class was having recess, and everyone was enjoying themselves. The sky was a gorgeous baby blue, and the ...

Its was very creative and interesting. I could find nothing wrong with it, but that maybe you should describe everything a little but more. Other than that it was very ...

Your story was so awesome. I could imagine the ENTIRE scenario and feel the characters, and feeling and I really want to know what happens next and who the mysterious ...

Your story caught my attention but I think you should describe the character better, and the surroundings as well. Also who is this mysterious man trying to kill Dobliv?Why does ...

I really liked your story, it was very good. Although it would have been nice to get a good description of the characters, and as the other commenter put a ...

I really like this story and usually i don't really finish the story unless it is good, so your story was really good.I really liked it and it had me ...

Hey I was wondering if you could review my story the topic is below:

It was very good I would like to see what happens next, although I would like a description of what Christian Looks like.You provided no description of him.

I really liked your poem because I could relate to it, and somehow feel emotions by reading your poems. It was fantastique .

I think your story was very interesting although I'm not sure what you meant by "I had just died after all". Did she actually die and come back to life? ...

Future Nightmare, Present Dream I was running as fast as my legs could carry me and as I ran I could hear leaves crunch under my feet. I could feel ...

I really like your story.Usually people do not write about mermaids often,and I like how you decided to write about something very uncommon to people. I think you should post ...

Please review mine please!Below is the link for my prologue. Thnks!

I think your story was really good, and interesting. The whole music concept was really cool, and I've never seen anything like it before. I think the title is a ...