nativecatcher

................Wow that was very good. No words can really describe how moving it was, and at the end it was very surprising. I loved it and you should continue with ...

So I made this up yesterday while I was staring out my window. I know its unclear, but I would love reviews so I could clean it up a bit. ...

So this is my first time ever doing poetry in general, and I would love it if you guys gave me some critiques they would be very helpful. I'm trying ...

Thanks for all of your help!

Thank you for all of your reviews and tips I will gladly take them into consideration.

I'm not very good with grammar or much of a grammar freak, but I did enjoy reading your story. It was magical in a way, and I couldn't stop reading ...

Actually I did mean to say that but if it doesn't make sense I'll change it to another insect or fly or whatever.

Thanks for helping I took your advice and made the changes!I hope it's better now and easier to understand.

Thanks for posting more of the story it was very good. Your friend is a very talented writer. Your descriptions were very good, and I couldn't see anything wrong(this is ...

This story was pretty good. I usually do not like fighting,medieval, elf type stories, but I had fun reading yours. So Good job, and as the first reviewer put include ...

I liked this story, and caught my eye. I'm very curious as to whether or not Ellie and the G.E.B(Green Eyed Boy) were friends on Earth. I really enjoyed reading ...

The field was a pale green with butterflies insects and searching around for their food. The sun rose out from a cluster of pine trees, reflecting the tiny water droplets, ...

Thanks for your critiques and tips this will help me a lot. I will edit my prologue and add more, and again THANK YOU!(P.S Durriedog you weren't nagging :lol: )

It was a pale green grassy patch with little critters and flowers moving around and blowing with the wind. The field was deserted with her being the only exception. She ...

I like this story, and although it is just a piece of the story i liked it. Although it would have been nice to have some description I'm sure I'll ...