nativecatcher

I really liked this, it was simple maybe a bit cheesy but none the less sweet. I think you have a great writing talent.

Thank you all for help I will revise this!

Wow, this is different, I've never seen a novel like this. Are you planning on making it like this for ever on? Or is this just showing the characters that ...

Removed.

This is the cutest and most intriguing piece I have ever read. You're a really good writer. I'm a very visual person and even though there weren't many details I ...

Title-Her dawn Genre:Fantasy Fiction Length: Less than a page I know you can't post a review on that one so can you post the review on Her Dawn(Temporary)? I know ...

Actually the woman isn't a vampire, but if it's getting kind of confusing I'll try to make it more clear. I will try to post more also :lol:

Okay everyone I locked my last prologue and edited it but now I cannot unlock it so I just have to make a new topic...sorry A woman’s tiny figure lay ...

The field was a pale green with butterflies insects and searching around for their food. The sun rose out from a cluster of pine trees, reflecting the tiny water droplets, ...

Loved it but again add more detail.

I really liked reading your first I was hesitant and skipped over, but decided to reconsider. I'm glad I did because I found it original and interesting. I would love ...

I thought it was good as the other readers said and I agree with them. You should try to slow your pace down a bit.Also try to use more description. ...

Part of the first chapter I've written please write helpful reviews. One: Discovery “Mama the water is boiling!” I yelled excitedly jumping up and down by the black stainless steel ...

No it wasn't mean it actually helped a lot. Thanks for taking time, I greatly appreciate it.

Thanks for all your tips, and reviews they helped. :lol: