nativecatcher

This is a new project I recently started. Prologue I heard my mother’s rich laughter fill our living room as I played with her black bouncy curls. We were sitting ...

This is a really cute story. To me it somehow seems to tell a lot with so little words.I think maybe you could have used a little more detail like ...

I really...love this story. I really hope you continue this because it's so interesting and well written I loved everything about this honestly. If this were a book I would ...

I'm bad at grammar so if anyone can correct me on that I would greatly appreciate. True Love is just like morning glories;so fulfilling, vivacious, and bright. The morning comes ...

Thank you all for your critiques and comments I will work on it and post the edited version.Again thanks alot.

I'm not very good at poetry, but I wrote this earlier to try and express how I was feeling. It is also really short. They've always liked her better, I ...

I think it's intriguing, it has caught my attention and I do want to know more about the situation. I didn't find anything wrong with the prologue either.When you post ...

I really like this so far. Usually I don't read action type books, I just watch movie, but this was really good. I don't have anything bad to say about ...

1 6:03 am Interesting how you got all these differant characters. I guess I should get started reading your actual story. Hmm I think you should*wink*

In general I really like your story, I think it has potential to be something special. The only thing I have to say is that at some points I felt ...

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Thank you so much!!!This had made me happy!!

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Wow. I feel like I have read something similar to this before, but something about this writing seems to give it a special edge. I think you did a great ...

In general I really like this piece. I find it interesting although I did get confused at certain parts so I had to reread them. I'm not very good at ...