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Ok I'll remember the rules :D My favourite books are: 'The Shadow of the Wind' by Carlos Ruiz Zafon and 'The Book Thief' by Markus Zusak. However, poetry is my ...

He is given the baby to hold in his strong arms; he remembers all he’s been told – how a newborn disarms a man’s heart; how a man begins to ...

I bought the chain with my eyes when I saw it on display – no price tag, just a sticker that says ‘Special offer! A negotiable price!’ So I negotiated ...

“A star-filled sky” You say. “Just a pierced eye” I say. “The world is beyond the cape of night” You say. “The world is beneath the cape of night” I ...

'friend from enemy is impossible to tell.' How very true! I really like this poem. Its tone is spellbinding and the poem knows exactly where it's going. I have one ...

Yes, I like this and I agree with Brendan. This poem sounds almost like a song. I also agree with his point about rhythm. This poem seems to have no ...

'Severing the silence comes a diamond-splitting crack And the violating silhouette lies writhing on its back.' I really like this piece. Flawless rhythm and a brilliant rhyme scheme. The lines ...

I really like this, but I agree with the others. You have to be a little more careful when structuring your poem. Always check your punctuation (don't forget apostrophes) and ...

Hi! My name is Nathan Bednarek. I'm 18 and I live in London. I love all kinds of literature, but I always admired poetry the most. I write poems about ...