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Thanks Indi! The capitalization of "He", "She", and "They" were on purpose- as was the lack of names. I was just experimenting to see if this was an effective way ...

Well done! This piece is very engaging and I agree with what you're saying. You write in a very casual manner which is appealing because it really draws the reader ...

That's quite helpful! This was actually a piece I had written for a class where the goal was to give "snapshots" of life events, but I do agree with you- ...

This is a piece I wrote about my first experience cliff jumping this previous summer, with my best friend at his cabin. Comments/critiques are much appreciated! :D The boat pulls ...

Good job! I really like this piece because it's easy to relate to, I feel that I am able to empathize with you even though I have not been in ...

There are certain people in your life that you feel the need to prove yourself to, to impress. It’s not a competition, just a desire to show that you can ...