natalie

Wow! really impressed! I love the ideas. At first, when I read the part about being a royal vampire, I thought it would lead into being incredibly cliched but I ...

Oh My God WOW!!! This is so cool! i love the way that it still makes sense somehow, even though it is all completely nonsense! (or is that just my ...

hia biscuit. Just wanted to say that this is amazing! the deepness to it is really good and I love the description which appears throughout in just the right places. ...

Firstly, I'd like to make it clear that this is just a first draft that needs dramatic work. I simply want to know if the idea makes sense, or if ...

Oh wow. That was simply beautiful When I saw the title I wasn't sure what to expect but this is so touching and special. If your friend were here to ...

Okay, firstly, I loved it. The really intimate meaning behind the poem really made it stand out. The poem flowed beautifully and I loved the last two stanzas, especially the ...

Overall, I thought that the description was incredibly detailed and quite wonderful, though possibly unnecessary in places. I understand why you would think that the second person might be strange. ...

firstly, like others, I love the idea of using trolls as your main characters. During this beginning section you have already begun to erase the idea of trolls being the ...

This was the first piece of coursework I had to do. It isn't perfect for a short story but I thought I'd let you have a look anyway... Under the ...

This is the prologue to a story which I started writing a while ago. I never got much further than the 2nd chapter. Read it and tell me what you ...

I am in love with this poem! Though the meaning is incredibly sad, the soothing rhythm of the poem makes it feel much easier to read and makes the situation ...

I love this poem. It has great feeling and the variation of stanza length adds an amazing structure which is easy to read. The first stanza is amazing, i love ...

I love the poem. Its take on the Greenday song makes it easy to relate to and i actualy prefer the poem to the song, it feels much more melancholy ...

Hi Charlie! I really like this poem, I didn't knnow you wrote pieces like this. :D This imagery is beautiful and the style of poem is simple and easy to ...

Settle into your basket of lace A yawn is taking your bright smile's place Your radiant heart ignites with grace The evening is yours tonight. An ocean of wonders awaits ...