narutobleachfan101

The best tip I heard from a friend is never stop and think about the plot. Just let it flow in your head. It's your story, and no one else's. ...

This mostly belongs on the back of a book. You want to draw in the reader with the first sentence. Other than that, it does intrigue my interest.

Prologue “Yo Ryuuko.” Today is the girl’s first day of high school at Blade Academy. Before arriving to the entrance ceremony, she encountered a few punks on the way. Stereotypical ...

There was also this part: Snapping back to reality, I grabbed my black, school bag, and fell flat on my face when I finished rushing down the stairs. The falling ...

First off, I really liked this little snippet of hopefully what will be a great story. I thought it was really funny and I could especially feel the sarcasm coming ...

Oh my goodness! So much tension building! And is it a cliffy? 'Cause if it is, I want to know more!

Yo, this is Saya, first time reviewing. Your prologue captured my attention, though it sounded like sarcasm. (No offense.) Anyway, keep writing! I look forward to the next part.

Prologue “What are you still doing in bed?” A voice cried out, whacking my head with a foreign object. Opening my eyes, I saw Asami-nee with a rolled-up newspaper in ...