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Hi! Okay. I like it so far. I'm curious to know what Z-Ball is. It sounds fun. Also, I kind of like that he goes to a Spy Academy. It ...

Hi! I'm Narniafreak! First, I actually liked it. At first, I didn't know what this was going to be about, but it was good! So great job! I found some ...

My eyes scan the ground looking for signs of someone passing through the woods. Broken branches, flattened grass, and rustled leaves lead my way. The soft imprint of bare feet ...

oh, okay. Sorry, I'm not aware of how English people spell everything. =] Okay, that's fine if you're explaining it later. =] -Narniafreak!

Peter and the Starcatchers: The story of how Peter Pan, became Peter Pan.

These are from old stories I started but never finished. 1. A long time ago there was this place where you could be transferred to magical lands. 2. "Beep, beep!" ...

Pray. What would you do if an alien race decided to invade Earth, and you transmitted a message from them that told you all of their plans?

Books

Hi! Hope I help. First, like you did with Chapter One I suggest putting at the top, Aaron, to indicate who's view it's in. “They’re probably just getting something from ...

Hi! I'm Narniafreak! I hope all my comments help. How did I know it was slippery? A monkey had just fallen off… but you don’t want to hear me tell ...

Hey! Thanks! I really appreciate helping with the grammar things. My goal for this year is to try and actually remember some so I can proofread my stuff better. I'll ...

Chapter One: I huddle in the dark, unable to go back to sleep. I glance at the clock; its digital red numbers glare 2:16. The house is silent, besides my ...

Hi! I'm Narniafreak! I hope I help. First, if needed, split the story up into parts, so reviewers aren't overwhelmed with the length and decide to skip out helping. [ie. ...

Hi! I'm Narnifreak! First off, I like the detail and where this story is going. It sounds like it's going to be good. I hope my other comments help. he ...

Hi! I'm Narniafreak! My comments will be in parentheses and italics. I hope they help. "Man, I love friday nights. Don't you?" I told my best friend, as we walked ...