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Hi! I'm Narniafreak! THE END?! It can't be the end! He's almost escaped! He has the chip! Everything is going great, how can it be the end? What is the ...

pshh.. that's perfectly okay! I probably would do that on accident too! especially since Thresh is cool, though he died...

Hi! I'm Narniafreak! First, I saw this and was like "hunger games? AHHH! I love those books!" Okay. This leaves me with many questions however. I like how you incorporate ...

Hi! I'm Narniafreak! Wow, this was really interesting. It really caught me and I even ignored my friends new message on Facebook for a few minutes to finish it. The ...

Hi! Okay. This was exciting! The whole bird having those blue-eyes and everything was crazy. However, it was rather short and didn't let me in on what the whole plot ...

Hi! I'm Narniafreak! First off... it more or less seems like an interesting story. It's obviously a fantasy world that will have a wonderful storyline with the elves and humans. ...

Hi! I'm Narniafreak! Alright here I go. This was a good starting point. It grabbed my attention mainly because of the boy who helped her and she doesn't know who ...

Hey! I'm Narniafreak! Welcome! Aww this story was kind of cute. I liked it. The end where their rings and blood became the stars and stuff were really cool. I ...

Hi! I'm Narniafreak! I don't usually review fanfics but I saw Legion of Superheroes and thought cool! Anyways. When you have people talking, you'll want to start a new paragraph ...

Hi! I'm Narniafreak! Well, the title really caught my attention. I was like Lizard Boy ? Sweet! And it was rather interesting what happened. The beginning part in italics really ...

Hi! I'm Narniafreak! First I'd like to say that there wasn't a lot to go on for this piece. It was a bit short and I was a little confused. ...

Hi! I'm Narniafreak! Well, this was interesting. Serena is stuck in ballet school when she wants to fight dragons... hmm.. I like that. It seems to call for a great ...

YAY! I'm soo excited for this! hah. First off, pretty good. However, I really want to know who Trent's father is. That's probably a very important aspect of the story. ...

Hi! I'm Narniafreak! First off, the intro totally pulled me. Even the first line made me curious as to where this story would be going. So good job! =] I ...

Hi! I'm Narniafreak! This was sad! I did like how she just brushed off his death like it was nothing. Gives her a bit of character there. All the mentioning ...