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Sucks, stuff like that has happened to me as well. There's one foolproof system - at the end of each day, email your files to yourself. Takes a minute, may ...

Yo, I read this chapter, and it was a nice read. Gentle, steady rhythm, like a real published fantasy, which I would read in a book lying on the sofa ...

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Yo, I got to Bismark Propaganda News Here are my impressions. Unlike a short story, where nit-picking is very welcome, concerning an unedited novel nit-picking I believe to be counter ...

Yo, still bursts of very convincing style. At times a little over the top, like the house being empty like a seashell, but Ray Bradbury does that in every sentence ...

Yo, Call me Ishmael :D reads so far like a nice kid's story. Kid loves books, parents missing, CIA guardian angel (a sign of the times no doubt, good thing ...

Yo, that rather reads as a stream of consiousness :D Which I think you should be doing five years from now, after grasping and perfecting the basic rules, after the ...

Yo, I think the first part was great. I wouldn't add anything, and I wouldn't take away anything. The 'dirty little heathen' is fine, and throwing in 'Maria' is fine ...

A witch! A witch! Burn her, burn her! Hehehe The healing sequence reminded me in a way of the similar episode in the second Matrix, when Neo was healing Trinity, ...

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Ha, Snoik, you caught the right faultline between the styles in the poem. I think Zenjoy is very much into music, some types of pop, alternative rock and possibly punk. ...

Argh, no, I also liked the poem very much! A bit at cross-purposes here we are, dear Empress, I made that post as a poke at Galerius's evil style, not ...

:elephant: (a galerius parody) Hihi Zenjoy, the reek of putrifaction from the decaying carcass of this homunculus which you have grown in your laboratories is a testament to your sparks ...

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Yo, Oh my, what a lovely little story (I thought as I started reading) Oh my, what a lovely little beginning of a story (I thought as I finished reading) ...