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Well, I've digested the absurdist idea, and decided to apply it to my own biblical project. This is the missing element. I wondered what I needed to make it click. ...

Hey, from this point of view, this can become an excellent absurdist piece. If after every event or word the main protagonists /or anyone else/ grits his teeth, knits his ...

Yo, nice story. Or rather, first part of story:) It was obviously written in one breath, as the milions of mechanical mistakes show hehe. A spontaneous outburst of action fiction. ...

Hallo! That was very nice. Snappy, good rhythm, nice pulp style in a fantasy setting. Substituting the private eye with the mercenery but keeping the atmosphere - you are getting ...

Yo, Dr Robert, respect for fiddling with the internet and writing books when most..contemporaries...just give in to the creeping fog. It would be great if you pasted a chapter or ...

Yo! An excellent little piece! Nothing really wrong with it, here are my suggestions for a few minor tweaks An owl hoots suddenly, startling me out of my reverie - ...

Yo, Sana, as Karsten says - when it looks ready, has a site and a link for purchase - what other conclusion can one make? Plus I googled around and ...

My honest personal belief is that the whole literary field has gone corporate-soap in the last three decades. There was a brief explosion in the twenties- early forties, and another ...

Yo, well, I reviewed this text, then clicked the link at the bottom, and it turned out, that the books is already written, finished and published,and this here is something ...

Drugs. Sex. Rock'n'roll.

Yo! You seem to be a very pro-semicolon writer. They stand at the gate, to attention; their great, round, stone bellies /the semicolons appear to work here, but still I'm ...

Yo, an interesting story, and of course, an utterly plausible ending. I hear Chuck Norris pushes the ground away, not himself, when he does pushups... Anyway, on the literary front: ...

Hihi, thanks for the feedback, Aspiring and Angels-Symphony! But I'm gonna have to make a stand here - this is exactly the way the story should start. With the protagonist ...

Researched the Lazarus legend, aparently one school of thought points to France, the other to Cyprus. Absolutely not my invention :D

Yo, thanks for the feedback AyumiGosu17 and Aspiring Author! Thanks for the detailed pointing out of various errors Aspiring, and yes, I suppose it should be 'poor souls' and 'what ...