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Haha, watch it by all means, Phoenix, it's good to know what goes on in the entertainment sphere, just make sure you're watching it for free :D

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Yo, The cloaked figure peered through the black night, The moon providing faint light as she searching for an exit - here, the rhythm of the description gives away the ...

The moment you can read a chapter without feeling that 30% of it is missing - it's done. Everything else is a bonus which is good, but not necessary :evil:

OK Shubhi, but in a few days :D

Amanda smiled her counterfeited glee as usual - I understand where you're going, but I think it should either be 'smiled with her' or 'gave her counterfeit smile' giving the ...

Yo, Shubhi, I've done what I can,I hope all this helps.

Yo, as such this intro seems to be quite in order. All the elements are there, the nuances though need fine tuning. “Please tell me you're joking,” I pleaded. Olivia’s ...

Yo, if you're really experimenting, then experimenting should be for the sake of experimenting and the plot can go to hell if that is necessary. If you have to ask ...

Yo, techniques to up the wordcount is a very legitimate issue, what with publishers having delusions of corporate grandeur and imposing ridicilous word count barriers... and here is my take ...

I write novels and novellas in the following manner: 1) day one - thinking up the story arc and the characters 2) day two - breaking it up into chapters. ...

Ok Shubhi, I'll do it on the weekend!

Yo, thanx for the kind words, angermanagement,antimelrose and kineta :D and thanx for the in-depth review christian alexander. I though I might get away with stuff like 'coming me to ...

Hihi, thanx for the review Kineta :D Soon I will return the favor and pass on some more kids stuff?

Yo, Kineta, here is a kid's poem. I'm experimenting with stuff for kids. Most of the things I write are things which you warn that you do not review /qurky ...