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Thank you Jashie! :smt003

Woooo, aaaaah, Jashie, thank you for the chapter 1 review. And a few more words from me on your wall:))

Arrr, good to know, arrr :pirate3:

Thank you itsjustemilie and kr1117 (ever notice how communication in the Internet is like in a sci-fi story: "thank you master_of_lizards and x13pootkl" hahaha), for the feedback. I really would ...

And me, and me, and me, and mine, and that thing here I did... please :shock:

Editing it? Wowie :D Just keep in mind, I'd be more that happy with a general overview, and one or two random chapters under a microscope will be enough to ...

And I have a novella... thriller mriller... somes sci-fiski... and stufski...

Hey, I read a bit through the expanded version, if I may call it that. I must say, you are actually successfully getting away with a huge cast of characters. ...

Yo, this one please it's a suspence thing with sci-fil elements

Well, I just read the four chapters. Oh no, the dreaded inspirational fiction, argh, choke, zoink, hahaha. Themewise, this is probably the only thing which is further from my tastes ...

Emmily, thanks for the feedback! Especially stuff like span/spun and abs/ads, etc. When comes time for editing, I'm sure tons of stuff like that will show up, but an outside ...

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Hi Emmily, I see you've pulled from oblivion an ancient thread! The story seems to have been was posted in 2008, and by checking the 'comments' and 'wall' in the ...

Ah, hey, sorry, didn't know, nevermind :D I withdraw my request and will come back at a later date with something from the short story forums, cheers

This one please: I'm begging for reviews because I'm really uncertain. Was it a good idea to compress a novel into a novella length while retaining the structure of a ...