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And a good job it was! Thank you very much, Skins.

Yo, I just read your novella. I never nitpick, I usually comment on the sentence structure, internal consistency and stuff like that, but here... I feel out of my depth. ...

Yo, Skins, thank you for the nitpicking, although half the times it touches upon style issues which can be interpreted in various ways, but! - the thorough documenting of your ...

My turn to ask for your opinion skins :mrgreen: it's a short novella. Either it will suck you in, or it won't, in both cases I'd be thankfull if you ...

I joined YWS on September 23rd 2009, and since then have progressed considerably. At least so it seems to me. After writing half a dozen short stories and having had ...

Hi, a short fast novella for you attention. If it sucks you in it's fast that is. If you can't go past the first few pages, that's OK too, just ...

Hi, I just finished a very short novella, fantasy with some romantica, if you feel so inclined... :D

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Hi, this is a nice fragmentary little piece, and only two things caught my attention: 1. Kristy was ecstatic and two weeks later, we were going steady. - this should ...

Sure:) come the weekend, I'll review your story! /and yours too, Shubi :elephant: /

Pah, this idea apparently was another one of my 'I think it's brilliant, but everyone else thinks it sux' blunders. Peh. Pooh. Haha. I'm throwing in the towel :mrgreen:

Double spaced, point 12, Times New Roman or Courrier, with a page break inserted at the end of each chapter, and the *** stuff should be copied once and pasted ...

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Ah, I mean the progressive protestant and anglican sects of the day, naturally, and mystics like the theosophists, christian transcendentalists, etc. The 19th century progressive 'weirdoes', not the m

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