napalmerski

Well, it was worse than it sounded. Not merely a waste of time, it's actually bad for a writer. The feedback is not real, but a pre-fabricated currency in a ...

Yo, Today I became a member of the Authonomy site, and will be a member until monday, 10th of May. I uploaded there two novellas, and will see what happens ...

I myself am not sure what I mean:) Maybe I'm looking for rationalizations to not constantly strive to jump higher than myself, but only part of the time. The last ...

Yup, so many writers out there, and it would take half a year just to assimilate the major works of each one. Ever since I realized how much reading I ...

In the end I read Street Magic. Terrier just didn't click, I was totally not in the mood for first person journal entries, I wanted a 'real novel'. Well, now ...

Thanx Rosey, Terrier it is!

Snoik, I had hoped at least you wouldn't push me towards writing 300 word vocabulary flying teenage werewolf magician latex vampire porn :D Thanx for mentioning Tamora, Rosey, I'll check ...

Yo, I see some changes in your manuscript /bthw, why not announce the edits in foot high letters next time, to alert the other inhabitants of YWS that something's brewing, ...

Hi everyone, I've been musing... What do you think should be the correct ration between writing on one's true level, writing slightly below one's true level, and trying to transcend ...

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Yo, it's me your friendly neighborhood Napalmerski. I don't do grammar, plot and characters, but I do do sentence structure and internal consistency. I did notice commas missing here and ...

Hey Apple, that's a nifty ninja review there - thanx! May the gods of juve lit lend an ear to your good wishing! :elephant:

Hi Kara, thanx for the feedback, very appreciated. Yes, it's difficult to judge plot and character based only on the two remaining chapters. I don't know why I leave small ...

Yo Krupp, thanx for the kind words man. This was indeed intended as an attempt at writing a kid's story. I was beginning to fear that the trauma of adulthood ...

Aha! An attack of existentialism! I envy the bursts of spontaneous poetry which explode in various points of this text, Krupp. For me writing is a controlled affair, I distrust ...