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In the end, I've come up with the following attempt at balance - writing in three-stage ascending waves: 1. write stuff I can handle 2. write stuff I can handle ...

I love the concept. Cynosure rules! Grimjack's adventures mean anything to you? Excellent comic book from the early 80's. I also have a concept waiting for its time which is ...

Dankeshen, dankeshen :D If you really will use this program, keep in mind that with the 'save as' option you can save it as ordirnary 'windows word' which other can ...

Yo Tusker, that's sound advice! But I'll follow it later :D Let's view this as a practice burst - I'll fiddle with varying genres just to get the overal feel ...

Yo, I almost never review plot, characters, and grammar, only style and sentence structure. Here goes: They had been told of an abundance of food and jobs that awaited them ...

Yo, nice story, and I almost relaxed into expecting a longer adventure to unfold, before the ice cracked. It is Icarus after all:) Nice way of turning the heat of ...

Yo, this is quite nice, confusing, stream of consiousness impressionism. Actually I'm a sucker for small hints of important past events interwoven into babble. It seemed to be waiting for ...

Yo, adventure! Castles in the desert! Choppers with missiles, wheee! Here is my basic feedback/advice, using as basis the first sentences. The chopper was heavily armed with several missiles and ...

Yo, I read this fragment, it was nice, dynamic style. Two sentences which I suggest need some attention: I think like this for several seconds, my thoughts are choppy and ...

Right, I've very few things to do until mid July. Then I've got stuff to do. I can again start writing seriously in September. So, until said mid July, I'll ...

Right after high school I became a journalist for a newspaper. One of the editors, a sympathetic woman, gave me ivaluable advice about writing. It was about writing articles, but ...

I think, that sometimes even up to 80% of 'tell/show' ratio is acceptable, especially if it's a high lit book, or a pulp adventure :D

Right you are, .:Elf:., I checked Inkpop out, absolutely the same crud. What is it with these sites? A secret project to condition people to being useless lying dweebs with ...

Yo Kibble, I meant more or less the opposite :D If, for example, someone writes a Maximum Ride type of book, a Silence of the Lambs type of book, and ...

Here's abiword - free program, equivalent of a 90's windows word. Handles anything, has its limitations, but will serve your purpose