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Hey, excellent point of view spin from the high-tech inheritors to the crazed survivors! I think the descriptions are quite enough, maybe about 15% of people's faces and clothes missing, ...

Krupp, your feedback gives me wings AND provides me with names of authors I immediately start researching. This is the best feedback one can hope for. Thank you so much ...

For a moment there I thought the protagonist was a patient in a mental hospital, with the rambling about the fly and questions like 'how are they treating you here', ...

Prokaryote , thank you for reading, Leebass , thank you for reviewing. Ballard is Ballard, insane sci-fi brits are insane sci-fi brits (brilliant as they are), in this case I ...

Ah, Krupp, great to hear from you!! Be warned, there's more summarizing than real prose in that experiment. (better see what I just put into the general fic stories, now ...

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How about a short story collection? No need to plow through all of them, although that would be nice too :D summary of genre and structure - at the beginning ...

Me, please, me grabbing at the 'occasionaly' concerning your reviewing of sci-fi. I think in places it's literary enough to placate a cyborg-denialist :D Short story collection, I don't insist ...

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Thanx uncle jimmy!

An old piece? Great, I'll treat it like it's brand new and you're actually going to edit it. I loved the emotional flatness of this piece. My style at its ...

Thank you very much for the review Emmily, and for giving me the kind of feedback I asked for - of the "reader" and not so much the "editor" type. ...

Thanx for the review Idraax! (seeing that your names ends with 'ax' I should have known that the editing would be very thorough :wink: ) Anyway, it was very helpfull!

Ibraax, A very through proof-reading of the text, super! This completely saves me most of the mechanical effort, only the stylistic editing remains. As you said, the second half is ...

On contre, dear Jashie, this is the preliminary version, just to exhibit something while I was working on the rest. And the aforementioned rest is in Advanced Critiques only... yup... ...