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I really enjoyed this story, it was suspensful, well written, used great deatil, and was great all over! I don't know if I will be nitpicking with grammatical errors, because ...

I really enjoyed the poem, it was well written. And the idea very well expressed (Reffering to it as a battle gave it away for me). I enjoyed reading it.

I loved the poem. I just don't like the 'school safety' theme, (That's just me, though). The beginning definately captured the mindset of a teenager very well. It was well ...

I assure you, I don't seem to notice any blood on my body and am surely full of life as I write this. Thanks for the criticism, I know it's ...

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The old, dry stone left resonating sounds as we walked hastily through the winding, seemingly endless maze of a cave. I wondered how long we’d been down here, or how ...

I really enjoyed the chapter, it was great! However, I feel that it was a bit fast paced, him being captured, knocked out, and waking back up. Alot of the ...

I really enjoyed this, although it elt a bit like a prologue, being a bit short and all. I enjoyed the suspense, it kept and held my attention. The title ...

I really enjoyed this poem. The lines and stanzas were well divided, and this was without gramatical or spelling error. I liked the tone of the poem. With what DevanEWilliams ...

I like the poem, it has alot of potential. But I think it needs to be worked on. Using abbreviations in poetry isn't usually a recommendation. And you should divide ...

I really liked the poem. The idea was well explained throughout, and actually getting it to rhyme nearly amazed me. (I usually have little sucess getting poems to rhyme.) "No ...

Amen. I've seen alot of my friends writing with good ideas. But their ideas tend to get a bit lost when they sit there for hours, thinking of rhymes to ...

To the first commentor, yes, this poem began about the man predicting the rapture, but can actually be about all zealous predictors, if you will. To the other two, and ...

False Prophet You feel yourself to be the first, yet you are one of many. An attention wh0re with a thirst unending. You felt a message, From your lord himself? ...

Well, as explenation. The is an HTML code from another site I go on quite frequently, I didn't realize I wasn't forced to type the blasted thing here!