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Thank you for the criticism, and I think after reading some critiqe, I'm out of my writers block. As for the last 'You were never alone', it was in italics, ...

Chapter 2: Revealing I awoke, not to the usual backdrop of white light irritatingly waking me from a rare treasure. Rather, awoke to what I now fear most. This. I ...

Chapter 1: Insomniacs Nightmare The little light of the night shown through my window, while the stone floor left resonating echoes as my foot tapped against it. The wine glass ...

I just have an additional comment, as I agree with Icy. It's not poetries, it's poems.

Hey there. First off, I loved this poem, the mood captured quite well with your wording and vivid imagery. (Spelling?). Since the punctuation has been revised, I won't redo it. ...

This was a really great poem. It gave me a vivd image of each point of refference to where you live. A really great poem, with the name fitting it ...

I'll start out by saying that I loved the poem. But as other s have said, I would consider this more dark than creepy, persay. The only spelling mistake I ...

[quote="567ajt"] He was a very mild mannered man you see, always apologising whenever he had a fit of anger on some unlucky girl who wants to go home. He’s also ...

I completely loved this story. It kept me on edge, and kept a mysterious tone, not letting too much be revealed. I couldn't honestly find any spelling or grammatical errors ...

I have o agree with everyone else, this poem is great, and I can relate to an extent. I have a slight case of insomnia, and yes, it's awful. But, ...

I feel that forcing rhyme schemes in often ruin a poem. Unless one easily comes to me. Monotonously forcing one in seems like it will ruin the poem.

Gold Forever, is a poem about the way we use up our time being 'gold', sometimes without making it worth while. Gold, Infinite, everlasting. All the time, energy, and youth. ...

I really enjoyed this, and I usually have a distaste for play format. But I believe play format was very helpful with this story, as it holds alot of dialogue. ...

I loved this, it was well written, and I enjoyed every line, as well as the message. Grammar wise, I have no nitpicking to do, because it was well written! ...

I liked the prologue, it was mysterious, and made me wan to read the story! The cover was great, I don't think the 'py' in happy in faded, it might ...