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Re: Stress
Is this a saying, a general truth, a sentence, a fable? Can you please label this piece, I am really interested.
Jul 30, 2011 -
Re: The Country Side
I adore the country side , I loved your piece. All I want to say, I really do do appreciate Brandon's review.
Jul 30, 2011 -
Re: Death of an Angel; Second Edit
short , precise and concise. A powerful message conveyed concisely. Let's see now if my reading of this piece is what you intended to impart to readers. First of all, ...
Jul 29, 2011 -
Re: Relief takes time
Stuck here His worst fear Not satisfied Feeling always tied ...Dark as charcoal Still chasing his goal Strong thunder NEVER surrender His belief his relief his composition his ammunition Chained ...
Jul 29, 2011 -
Re: Slip Away
I am going to give you my own interpretation of the poem. The way I see it that you may disagree with. I feel that in the first part you ...
Jul 29, 2011 -
Re: Image of the Almighty in my early childhood
when I was a kid, I used to watch from afar a disabled man in his red chair sitting with his fellow friends in the neighborhood. He looked ugly, bald ...
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Re: My Perseverance
I accept my flaws I reject all discouragement for I'm not perfect, but I'm not worthless. I love this part where you depict yourself in a humble manner. Telling the ...
Jul 29, 2011 -
Re: Kings
great i loved it ..except for few grammatical mistakes , it's an uplifting piece.
Jul 29, 2011 -
Re: Graveyard Shift
I am nothing like you. You are exactly like me. I choose not to be. There is no choice. If I'm like you, why doesn't this happen to me? Why ...
Jul 29, 2011 -
Re: Live
I really enjoyed it. precise and concise. To me it depicts the necessity to live and enjoy our lives to the fullest, whatever pain we feel there is always a ...
Jul 28, 2011 -
Re: My Confession
After we had the revolution in Tunisia . To me nothing seems to get better, no radical transformation .....
Jul 28, 2011 -
Re: My Confession
Rebellious was my Spirit A far better world we merit I woke up in the midst of the night Sensing a tremendous urge to fight Fight what?...against what?...for what?... Conquer ...
Jul 28, 2011 -
Re: If You Have Any Sense At All, You Really Shouldn't Read This
It is an interesting article. I do agree that in our society we judge a lot, though we can not grasp the essence of things. In fact, I can not ...
Jul 28, 2011 -
Re: Hopes And Fears
What I perceive in this short, concise uplifting poem is a stage of internal conflict between the narrator( the lover) and himself. The poet seems to be in love, he/she ...
Jul 28, 2011 -
Re: Love this
Absolutely, you are right. Once we are close to the creator we fear nothing in the world even the most feared by humans which is death.
Jul 28, 2011
