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Re: The Lunatic
Living in a society where you disagree with most of its traditions, superstitions, culture, behaviors, and mentality, is a tough and exhausting reality. Being different in a community does not ...
Nov 13, 2011 -
Re: Begin!
To Begin with, I say that Your "Begin" sounds like a journey towards purification, a cleansing of he soul; souls that have been long sunk in a deep pitch-black whole. ...
Oct 16, 2011 -
Re: ommmmmm
You went back home All I can do is roam while writing the poem ooooommmmmmmm Uttering a buddhist chant Meditating by a dying plant Inside an abandoned Tent oooooooommmmmmmm "Grande ...
Aug 16, 2011 -
Re: Asphyxiation
All I can say I loved the first review. Magnificent.
Aug 2, 2011 -
Re: Ode to: Scientists, Politicians, Prophets, et all...
Hello Personally I find this poem magnificent, I don't agree with the previous reviewer that it needs some changes for it to flow a bit better. It's already perfect. Good ...
Aug 2, 2011 -
Re: Ode to: Scientists, Politicians, Prophets, et all...
Hello Personally I find this poem magnificent, I don't agree with the previous reviewer that it needs some changes for it to flow a bit a better. It's already perfect. ...
Aug 2, 2011 -
Re: My wife and the old Goat
It was scorching hot, a typical African summer day. My wife and I were waiting for the bus to take us back to my hometown. Thankfully we happened to find ...
Aug 1, 2011 -
Re: Echoes
I totally agree with H. Smith. This piece takes me back in time when I used to sit on the back of the amphitheater years ago. I would listen carefully ...
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: Ask a question here (or start a new topic!)
What is the meaning of justifying salvation? Thank you.
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: Ch 9: A Love To Last More Than A Season
I find it very interesting in spite of the fact that I didn't read the first chapters. Your way of writing is incredible, I wish I can write a novel ...
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: Ramadan, A Blessed Month
@Abigail. I am waiting forward to hear your constructive criticism :)
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: Ramadan, A Blessed Month
After tomorrow we Muslims celebrate the holy month of Ramadan, out of happiness I wrote this piece . Hope you like it though as simple as it sounds.
Jul 30, 2011 -
Re: Ramadan, A Blessed Month
Robust is my body when I fast In Allah I everlastingly trust I am impatiently waiting for Ramadan Only then will I experience dawn Besides a healthier body and peace ...
Jul 30, 2011 -
Re: Goodbye
I will start from where you ended your poem" Death is a beginning". Here I clearly see the notion of immortality. I sense a kind of strong belief embedded firmly ...
Jul 30, 2011 -
Re: Safety Poem
Frankly speaking I do appreciate the idea. this literary work looks like a piece of advice or let's say a lesson learned the hard way. We should listen to parents ...
Jul 30, 2011
