mystiquevander

Musk infiltrated the air upon entering; a thick layer of intoxicating vile stung my nostrils, tightened the looseness of my throat as I peered waywardly about the room. Settled dust ...

I love the imagery in this poem, it really took me far! I can tell this was written with a more surreal touch than most pieces, and I enjoyed it ...

Hey there Forestqueen808, This poem when I read it seemed like a good start. It has a great fundamental subject matter, time, but I felt detatched when I read it ...

Awh, thanks so much all of you!!!! I write a lot of HP/DM FanFictions on so if you wanna read the rest of that story go ahead and do so, ...

Thanks so much Kafka, I have made some of the revisions you offered. However, 'cree' if spelt not in a subject form (without a capital) can also refer to the ...

This is dedicated to Noah A. Page, you are an extremely inspirational writer and a person I miss dearly in my daily life. I hope you're inspiring other people elsewhere. ...

Wow. I really, really liked this piece! It was fresh and something unique, especially the formating of it. I'm always scared to do something a little different when it comes ...

-Constructive criticism welcomed! =)- I concede to be what you need from me; Silent even though my lips still quiver. As night dawns, the depth of me wishes to flee ...

I really enjoyed this poem, here's a star! ^_^ I liked how it flowed, it was very well done and obviously thought out. You can feel the emotion in it ...

Hey there Ian, how are you doing? I see you're quite new here so welcome. =) (I'm still kinda new myself) For a kid your age, this is a good ...

Hey there WaitingForLife, how are you? First let me start by saying you are an intriguing writer who really captivated me with this piece in the sense that I found ...

This is a short prose I just wrote, I didn't quite know where to put it but since Prose = poetry, and it is dramatic and told from one persons ...

Yeah! At least I interested a few people to hopefully read it - I promise you won't be let down! ;) Heh

I like the subject matter for this poem, and I was going to throw in a few edits but it seems as though shiney1 already beat me to it! I ...

Perhaps we should not kiss tonight, beneath the hazy silver light; Intoxicated by the fumes of cigarettes and cheap perfume. Perhaps we should not dance tonight, lose ourselves in pulsing ...