mystical*dragons

This was really good, but I dont know, I had sort of guessed the end. So it wasn't that surprising for me. Anyway, good job! :)

hey, welcome to YWS. i'm fairly new too, this is a great place. hope u have fun over here!:)

hiya! Welcome toYWS, hope u have fun...and by the way...i'm accident-prone tooo...hehhehe

hey! welcome to YWS. By the way...i'm new too, i just joined a few days ago. And this place rocks! hope u have fun!

You have me speechless here. These are just amazing. Wow, you're a very talented artist. I have to say my favorite is the Swiss girl. Can't wait to see more ...

Oooh, I loved this. This was really good. You really brought the kid character to life. Great story.

Well, this was an okay story. You write very well, the only thing is that you kept the story really confusing, which is good, to a point. The start was ...

Wow! I like this, its got style. It's a very direct poem, which I like. Here’s how it’s gonna work, Princess. He’s gonna be you’re Prince Charming first, But then, ...

This was good, i really liked it. It's nice and simple, which works for a story like this. My only suggestion is that you should expand a bit more on ...

this was great...i rarely like poems...and i just loved this...just one typo though...corpes should be corpse...anyway...great job!

this was great...i really liked it...i haven't read the first one...i think i'll go read it now...

wow...this is a great story...you relayed the feelings so was just...PERFECT! :)

I'm a seascape you painted Look closely, amid the blues and greens You'll see a part of your soul, lost in the waves Yet you've put me aside, lost and ...

hey...thx for welcoming me tinkerbell! :)

hey, thank you for all the nice comments...i'm suprised to see anyone liked it, since i've started writing after a BIG gap of 2-3 years..and to answer your question...the guy ...