mystical*dragons

Actually I dont like the hand. 9/10 for the one you have currently.

I have a Sony Ericsson. I don't use it much, but I play a lot of games on it. Hehehe. I love my cellphone

Hi Nefer! Welcom to YWs and hope you have fun here :)

Thank you so much! That helped a lot! :)

Okay, so basically this is a really dumb question. But I have this habit of writing a lot of fragments and I was just wondering if they are grammatically wrong. ...

Hi Cicero! Nice to meet you. Hope you enjoy yourself here and I'm looking forward to read your work. :)

I really liked this poem. I could definitely relate to the feelings portrayed. I'm afraid I can't critic anything in this poem because I find it so perfect. I know ...

Well, okay, your story has potential. But there are a few things you could change; that would perhaps make the story more interesting. First of all, I think you should ...

8/10

misery

silver*glitter Prose (all genres) Please no poetry, I would never be able to help you in poetry because I'm not good at it myself! Just PM me, and I'll try ...

Hey, thanx for the nice comments! I'm glad people liked it. And yes, it is something I experienced, well not exactly, in my case, the guy didn't die. This was ...

This is so good, I agree with areida, its flawless. Good job!

This was really nice, i love the last two lines. Keep writing! :)

Thank you! That was very helpful. I've been playing with the idea of a novel, but I was sort of stuck, this helped though. :)