mystical*dragons

(Welcome to YWS, by the way!) Yes, this is in the right section. I like this piece a lot, you have displayed the emotions really well. It almost has a ...

Okay...this is getting better and better! Just a few tiny mistakes "...she couldn't bare it" It should be bear, not bare. "You shouldn't be on deck" It should be "on ...

Oooh, I really like you story. It's interesting and keeps you wanting more. It seems there are some words which are missing, resulting in incomplete sentences which does confuse the ...

Sorry, I know this is kind of late, but I wasn't feeling well so I could'nt get to your story before. Chapter 1 Nefer has pretty much covered everything, so ...

Wow, I dont know what to say. This was really well-written, and that's something, coming from me because I rarely like poems.

Thanks, I'm glad you like it! :D

Hey Nefer, you're my new best friend:) Thank you so much!

Thanks you guys. I'm glad you like it. I'll be posting more in a few days, I'll be looking forward to your opinion :)

I've never made a habit of watching t.v. too much. I just think it's too superficial and is spreading a culture that shouldn't be. Really, it's not like I don't ...

Thank you Snoink, this really helped.

The phone is ringing, piercing through a galaxy of dreams, a world away. Ignoring the phone, I turn over on my back, and then abruptly sit up on the bed, ...

Hi there! I'm silver*glitter and I like to write all kinds of fictional prose. Hope you have fun here! :)

Tears swimming in my eyes, I stare at you, searching deep within your eyes. But your eyes are blank, completely emotionless. I look down at the ring on my finger, ...

I dont know, a few weeks?

hi there