Young Writers Society

this was actually one of my favorite stories on the board. will you be posting the novel version here?

thanks for the grammar crits. i admitted when i first posted this story that grammar was not my forte. that's what they make editors for i suppose. :lol: also, i ...

this was a great story. i enjoyed it and i look forward to part 2. 8)

i think this is really good griffin writer. i liked the description and i like how the action happened right away, it kept my attention. can't wait to read more ...

hey thanks for the crits. 8) when i said graphee was short for his age i meant compared to other boys, not sefier boys. i suppose i should elaborate on ...

kudos to you for being so open minded. we need more people like this in the world. 8)

His aura was smelled of singed sandalwood and freshly dewed grass. this is a really great line. i really love it. “This…us…your damned chivalrous ways.” Ariel repeated. i also like ...

Chapter One: The village of Mushuk stayed quite still on these hot nights. The purple moon shown down its soft light on the pink waters of the Ugor and the ...

"I cant believe you done that." I snapped at Amber this should be: "I can't believe you did that." But deep down inside I was secreatly wishing I had of ...

thanks kay kay. i agree with a lot of what griffin keeper said as well. it's better to know your mistakes in the beginning, i think so anyway. i do ...

i still like it. you can tell a bit by the writing that you seem a little bored with it. i think it has more potential though. how about suzana ...

welcome! i think you will find the most honest crit's here, which i personally love. i have found in my week or so here that everyone is very polite and ...

griffin writer: thank you for all of your suggestions. this was only the prologue though the numbers you see at the bottom of some of the paragraphs are page numbers ...

arv - i was worried about the beginning sounding too, oh what's the word, cliche'? so i will most definitely spruce that part up a bit. i am always open ...

mattie - i think that this is a good plot, there are some grammar mistakes but i wouldn't be one to correct them since i make a lot of them ...