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It's been bugging me that I can't figure out why I'm being told one of my stories is too cliche. I just don't get it. Tell us a story you ...

I just got this yesterday and I thought the first mabey six chapters were great. That's all I have to say right now on this. :D

Ya I kinda sent them to my email from my phone so I can't really help any of that... I will bother my mom eventually to help me with the ...

Itr doesn't work for me....

My great work on tilting the lense^-^ My drawing of I have no idea actully... My lovely bundles of papers. Pretty picture! Very bad picture of my sketch of my ...

I think I started writting at 2nd grade. My first story that I remember was about a love that couldn't be and the two lovebirds anded up together. That I ...

_I just finished reading Book of a thousand days by the author of princess acadamy _Now reading Victory(No i don't remeber the author.)

I have to agree with you conrad. The people on this site do tend to enjoy some of my stories and are wiling to tell me things that need to ...

I would actully make the person look like there arms are bending and don't look like jello. But great other than that.

I like it too. The tree is a little blury.

Oh! It almost looks like your velvet!

The fishys are so cute! And the out line base of the girl's shadow is great. I would have used the same presure on the shading part thow. Or i ...

Its writen by the princes disrys author I forget her name. It about how the girl next door is always the manays...always smothing things over untill a famous film star ...

I love the first one, how the eyes sre the way they are...but the other two are blury... keep up te good work! -em

I just read it last week when I was sick and I thought it was pritty good. *sorry it's so short...*