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I don't have a blending tool. I tried to blend some of the colors in the sunset but they kinda didn't blend. One minute and I'll try to get up ...

*Since everyone's gone for the moment I better get my first post up then...* Wasn't here when It truly started...* Haithing: She had been about this game that past few ...

Grave: *Okay, I'm so lost because this has been down for a long time...* She was mounted and was on her way to the Greek's camp but why was she ...

Maria: She turned to the boy -wiat scratch that- younge 'man' :mrgreen: . "Um.. not quite sure. One of our vampire hunters has fallen for a vampire. Maria Striker," She ...

Savior sneezed as she came to her senses. She was nauseated but the feeling soon passed. She looked up to see trees in her path of the beautiful sky. She ...

Have you fixed what we're trying to tell you about? And aren't you going to like say after your t o be continued... ...continued . It would help. -Amber

I got bobbing bobcat. That's it. Didn't want to try harder than two tries.

Here i go. Now this is an atempt. Now, let's see what you think. -Atempt number one -atempt number two -Atempt number three. How good are they?

Any one mind pointing out the misstakes?

Oh, yeah. By the way I think for now it's an adventure and action story.

Okay, I need one more but I'll pm you guys when I get the other misstakes I've caught fixed so I don't have to hear about them again. :roll: :wink: ...

Maria Striker: Who the- Her thoughs were interupted. She tuned out the other noses on the forest and listened to hear another break though in this weird place. She just ...

Okay I shall review it. Thanks for volunteering.

Savior walked through the tall grass as to act natural when she appeared before her father's sight. "Where have you been?" Her father asked angrily. "Watching the fairies work on ...

Yes, exactly. Amanda you need to describe the character better but you have to string it out. It's a girl right? I remember reading it before but it sure sounded ...