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I was just wondering.....don't get me wrong though I do like it. -em I thought it was cute how they proved every onr wrong

center is spelld wrong... Hey are they gay? Just wondering.... -em

I do agree with L_A but I also have to say that for the first chapter that was long....well I have to go I have map testing tommarrow bye>.< -em

prayer is spelled but i really like it...how the main character has a wispering subconcience...most of the books I read don't have that. Again good job. -em

thanks -em

ok i'm trying....i'll fix the spelling real quick and she still fells resentment to vampires and it soon slips off...Woops I kinda' told a peice that's coming up.... thanks. -em

Hey I didn't know we could have a conversation in these things...... Oh hi nice to see another new member....there are so many.... -em I tend to fall from the ...

Hey that reminds me of one of the storys I wrote....this girl stood by a dark ally knowing that something was going to happen...something bad and Boo! out of nowhere ...

I'd have to interpret that as a very evil child..... But I like it. It kinda' cunfuzzed me in the beging but... over all great and good luck here...... -em

Great but you know if you add in to the day with out bursts of funny but randum crap it's more fun for others and posible you to....*just a thought...* ...

lol. That's to good....*giggle* Nice, that was great+.+ -em

That is a very interesting peice. Ilike it.+.+ -em

ch 1 _______________________________________________________________________ He popped in out of thin air as the girl slept. One of her hands was over her neck as she slept on her side. She knew ...

there in some are spelling mistakes in some places but pritty good job. -em

hey, this is great!!! There are a few spelling misstakes....I forgot witch ones....^,^ -em